What Would Be A Good Thesis Statement For The Story Of An Hour

Sample Student Literary Analysis:  Ironies of Life in Kate Chopin's "The Story of an Hour" (Notice how the first sentence gives the author, title of the short story and a short comment about some element of the story. Notice that the thesis is the last sentence in the first paragraph. The sentences in blue are the main points which support the thesis and connect back to it. Notice also how the quotations are integrated smoothly into the student writer's writing.

Ironies of Life in Kate Chopin's "The Story of an Hour"

Kate Chopin's "The Story of an Hour"--which takes only a few minutes to read--has an ironic ending:  Mrs. Mallard dies just when she is beginning to live.  On first reading, the ending seems almost too ironic for belief.  On rereading the story, however, one sees that the ending is believable partly because it is consistent with the other ironies in the story.

            After we know how the story turns out, if we reread it, we find irony at the very start.  Because Mrs. Mallard's friends and her sister assume, mistakenly, that she is deeply in love with her husband, Brently Mallard, they take great care to tell her gently of his death.  They mean well, and in fact they do well, bringing her an hour of life, and hour of joyous freedom, but it is ironic that they think their news is sad.  True, Mrs. Mallard at first expresses grief when she hears the news, but soon she finds joy.  So Richards's "sad message" (12), though sad in Richards's eyes, is in fact a happy message.

            Among the small but significant ironic details is the statement near the end of the story that when Mallard enters the house, Richards tries to conceal him from Mrs. Mallard, but is "too late" (13).  Almost at the start of the story, in the second paragraph, Richards "hastened" (12) to bring his sad news.  But if Richards had arrived "too late" at the start, Brently Mallard would have arrived at home first, and Mrs. Mallard's life would not have ended an hour later but would simply have  gone on as it had been.  Yet another irony at the end of the story is the diagnosis of the doctors.  They say she died of "heart disease--of joy that kills" (11).  In one sense they are right: Mrs. Mallard has for the last hour experienced a great joy.  But of course the doctors totally misunderstand the joy that kills her.  It is not joy at seeing  her husband alive, but her realization that the great joy she experienced during the last hour is over.

            All of these ironic details add richness to the story, but the central irony resides not in the well-intentioned but ironic actions of Richards, or in the unconsciously ironic words of the doctors, but in Mrs. Mallard's own life.  She "sometimes" (13) loved her husband, but in a way she has been dead, a body subjected to her husband's will.  Now his apparent death brings her new life.  Appropriately this new life comes to her at the season of the year when "the tops of trees [...] were all aquiver with the new spring life" (12). But ironically, her new life will last only an hour.  She is "Free, free, free" (12), but only until her husband walks through the doorway.  She looks forward to "summer days" (13), but she will not see even the end of this spring day.  If her years of marriage were ironic, bringing her a sort of living death instead of joy, her new life is ironic too, not only because it grows out of her moment of grief for her supposedly dead husband, but also because her vision of "a long procession of years" (12) is cut short within an hour on a spring day.

 

 

You might consider writing the following: the doctors' ultimate ruling concerning Louise Mallard's cause of death is ironic because it is not her joy that kills her, but rather her disappointment at finding her husband alive.  Then, in the essay, you could discuss the imagery of the "new spring life" outside the window and how it seems to symbolize what Louise is feeling inside herself.  For example, she hears the "countless sparrows twittering in the eaves" and notices the "patches of blue sky" and the "delicious breath of rain" in the air.  These are all such positive images.  You could analyze the little speech she does actually have in the story.  For example, why does she repeat the word "free" over and over?  It seems as though her husband was not a bad husband, as he never looked "saved with love" upon her.  You could even discuss her very healthy-sounding physical reaction to her new freedom.  If she is so ill, then why does her "pulses beat fast [now], and the coursing blood warm and relax every inch of her body"?  This sounds healthy, not sick.  

You could use much the same evidence to argue that Louise Mallard's so-called "heart trouble" is actually brought on by her marriage.  The fact that the lines in her "fair, calm face. . . bespoke repression and even a certain strength" seems to signify that it is the "repression" she has felt that may have seemed to weaken her, despite her initial and inherent "strength."  

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